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â Sufferâ
By: Nuen aka GODENBOI
To someone in the Familyâ Ś
Days of my life was like the â Great Depressionâ
Nothing to look forward to, life wasnâ t the reason
A Judge Reports by Ernest J Berry - Poetry Society::
Refer to Eric Amann's book Wordless Poem and, another of my axioms: "Haiku On the other hand, we do want poetry - something which grabs us by the shorts
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So much as a kid I wanted to escape reality
Wanted to run away, but the choice wasnâ t so easy for me
Night after night, I would dream of happiness
Day after day, hopes was useless
Laughterâ s in the air, kids play with no fear
Hands around my ears, sorrow from my family that was so hard to bare
So useless as a kid, what was my reason for being
So much scream for my ears, piss that my hands are not for healing
My eyes are deceiving, everything was so hard to conquer
Why must I face reality being only 4, why must I suffer
Life must be better if the pain wasnâ t to be suffer
But life wasnâ t the best cause it never gotten better
Whatâ s worse was the fact that it happen
Everyday, I would question myself what was the reason
So young and so confuse
Why must my eyes be guide to that great of an abuse
Why must I see the suffer
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File Format: Shockwave FlashMorris I want the reader to think, to look at the world from a different perspective. My poems tend to be a bit dark, so I interpose humor.
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I am not what I wanted, but yet I feel for your sufferâ Ś
this is a very emotional poem. and thats what poetry is about. i really adore it. please keep posting your work. i would love to read more.
emotional. deep but don't use suffer twice. i liked it alot A Fallens World -- I won't judge you, so don't judge me.::
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I have no basis to judge the poetry. My problem with poems is that I She says to start asking ourselves, "does anyone outside of the library care?"
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This sort of relates:
I once was a child
Enjoying warm, sunny days
Living pure and wild
Under bright brilliant rays
Then I began to grow
Hoping for a solid ground
I wished for it to be covered in snow
but this is not what I found
Everyday in my juvinility
I could not understand the gist
I still kept great vitality
Even though weather brought a mist
I became lost in dense fog
and so blind I couldn't see
Because of confusing smog
I lost all my youthful glee
My childhood was now in evanescence
And a dark storm began to brew
I was going through adolescence
When the cold rain soaked me blue
I felt the worst of any pain
as I trembled in agonizing fears
The storm was now a hurricane
The worst seen in 80 years
I had built a home
on a foundation of sand
So, I was now all alone
In a dark and dreary land
When the tempest did finally ease
And the cyclone came to its demise
I collapsed wearily to my knees
As tears streamed from my eyes
The weather quickly changed
And the stars were shining bright
I no longer felt estranged
As a man walking in the light
So, I know it it to be true
That the calm comes after the storm
Sometimes it takes being subdued
To truely be able to reform
Wow. wouldn't stick with it if i were you. stop saying suffer so much its getting on my last nerves!
Very interesting,
The emotions are strong
and this tells a story
I like two of the lines
day after day useless
night after night happiness.
Laughter in the air
I would change this to
Love is in the air.
because with love
life is happier
people get along
no reason for depression
also having a positive outlook on life.
With depression came with feeling useless
with much hopelessness.
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